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My Colors of the Wind

though life has fed me happiness crumbs and stabbed my heart with her dagger often she still takes my breath away each morn' her beauty flows through me like ocean waves and I stand within her wall of time, painting my life with the colors of the wind ___________________ November 28, 2021 Poetry/Verse/my colors of the wind Copyright Protected, ID 11-1409-976-28 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem No 28 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 12/05/2021 Third Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2022 5:08:00 PM

Beautiful, Constance ~

Constance La France
Date: 11/14/2022 4:57:00 AM

Line, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, appreciate, and thanks for the contest and my placement, I really love this poem and the song.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/7/2021 7:36:00 AM

Constance, nicely done--for all its pain life is still beautiful. Congratulations :)

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2021 7:37:00 AM

PS, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2021 10:01:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making see the colors of the wind in your life. God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2021 7:36:00 AM

Beata, thanks for the congrats and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/6/2021 9:36:00 AM

Wonderful, vivid imagery Constance. Love the strong verbs of life - "stab," "fled," "flows." They give such a sense of movement and texture to your lines. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2021 1:49:00 PM

Sam, thank you for the compliment and comment and the congratulations, blessings ~ love and serenity _Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 12/6/2021 3:25:00 AM

Lovely, Constance. Congratulations on your 1st place win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2021 6:40:00 AM

Charlie, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2021 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" Write. Each new day is filled with new color. Have a blessed day...........

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2021 1:01:00 PM

Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Ann Peck

Date: 12/5/2021 10:35:00 AM

I love your poem ~ especially "colors of the wind." Congratulations on your big win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2021 1:02:00 PM

Ann, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance

Lin Lane

Date: 12/5/2021 9:34:00 AM

Your wounds are evident, Constance, but always in a hopeful light. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2021 1:03:00 PM

Lin, thanks for the congratulations and for your comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/5/2021 7:54:00 AM

A wonderful work as usual. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2021 1:03:00 PM

Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/30/2021 3:40:00 PM

Hello Constance ... the story of life is your verse. Good times and not so good times affect us but we just have to keep going - thank you Constance - Lindsay

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 7:15:00 PM

Lindsay, thank you for the visit and the comment appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/30/2021 10:08:00 AM

Aww, this is absolutely beautiful dear Constance... what an imagination... painting my life with the colours of the wind... Learning a lot just by reading your poems my sweet friend... BIG hugs... ~ Ani

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 7:16:00 PM

Ani, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, big hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance

Howard Kerr

Date: 11/30/2021 10:00:00 AM

Constance, You have mined a rich vein of deep emotion in this compelling work. It’s immaculate. Thanks for recent Viola Viscera Vibrant placement. Much appreciated Best wishes Howard

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 7:17:00 PM

Howard, thank you for the compliment appreciate and you are welcome on your placement, best wishes ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Valsa George

Date: 11/29/2021 6:10:00 PM

This is beautiful .... Lfe doles out a mixed pack of joy and pain. One who can sift sunshine from an overcast sky is the winner. This poem brings forth the undisputed reality of life and tells how to face it! Thanks for your encouragement, dear Constance~

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 9:23:00 AM

Valsa, thank you for the compliment and the wonderful comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2021 4:28:00 PM

gorgeous, Dear Heart, simply gorgeous.

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 9:23:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/29/2021 3:39:00 PM

I love this. Beautiful :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 9:24:00 AM

Heidi, thank you for the beautiful, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/29/2021 1:58:00 PM

Dear Constance, I love each and every one of your poems, and this one again touched my heart with its depth of meaning, and lyrical beauty of the verse. Dear Friend, your poems stem from your heart, and touch others'. You are a winner. Truly appreciate your support on my poetic journey. Love and blessings ~ Mala

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2021 9:25:00 AM

Mala, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment, you make me so happy, blessings ~ love and serenity _Constance

David Mchattie

Date: 11/28/2021 7:07:00 PM

No matter how many times you fall it's how many times you get up. Well penned my friend. Truly a lovely piece.

Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2021 9:35:00 AM

David, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance