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How Could I Love Anyone Else

My BELOVED...how did I find a suture to my soul and mind- our eyes first met I was so blind, offered a gracious heart, so kind. Before romance love was defined, I swear the Lord had it designed. Our souls and hearts became entwined, now we’re passion and trust combined- before death takes me please remind me that our love outweighs mankind. I can’t resist your sweet embrace, you tenderly caress my face. You stole my heart without a trace, our love soars throughout time and space. Please gently remove my white lace; o, take me to our sacred place. Let’s take this at a slower pace; you are my addiction, (my chase). You treat me with adoring grace, love making release…just in case. I promise to love only you- throughout the years, oh how we grew. Please take my hand let’s say I do, and have some babies, one or two! I’ll whisper love’s secret so true. You walked in my life right on queue; I’ll bring you joy when you are blue, we’ll make some magic all night through. For great men like you there are few- tonight your silhouette I drew. Believe me when I state my vow, you love me so- I wonder how. As you tenderly wisp my brow with soul and desire, (I’ll allow). Ask when I need you, I'll state now, sweet adoration I’ll endow. They wonder who I love, it’s thou, you promised you won’t disavow. You are my king I’ll always bow, and so darn handsome, I think “WOW!” I’ll walk beside you not behind, love's true guarantee has been signed. Your love I shall never replace, I’ll never treat you with disgrace. Memories of kisses you blew, you’re love I’ll never misconstrue. In death, I’ll keep living somehow, your touch I'll never disallow. For you’re God’s greatest creation… I swear love and dedication.
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Form: "LUDix-rym" 5 rhyming stanzas- 10 lines per stanza 8 syllables in each line Rhyme Scheme: Stanza 1 - a x 10 Stanza 2 - b x 10 Stanza 3 - c x 10 Stanza 4 - d x 10 Stanza 5 - aabbccddee Date written - November 3, 2016 Judged - October 6, 2019 N-A rerun 4 Poetry Contest Sponsor - John Hamilton
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:19:00 PM
Sublime, absolutely sublime stuff here, Luloo!:-) Heartiest congrats for your deserving win!
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:02:00 PM
You my dear friend are an amazing writer congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:13:00 PM
What a wonderful write Laura, congrats on a great second place win!
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:28:00 PM
Thanks for wondrous piece that exemplifies what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 7:34:00 AM
no! sorry for late response, thank you! x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/20/2019 8:39:00 AM
Read this lovely piece again and looooved it, Luloo, nice form:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 7:34:00 AM
thank you again!! x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2019 1:38:00 PM
Great example for the contest, each stanza a monorhyme .. hugs eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 7:34:00 AM
sorry for late response, wanted to say thank you lovely Eve! x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2019 11:14:00 AM
This mostly Monorhymed form (dedicated "To the one I love") is quite challenging, Laura. I see that Constance has already picked up the gauntlet:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 12/18/2019 7:33:00 AM
sorry for late response dear Paul- I appreciate your lovely comment, thank you x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/7/2019 12:58:00 PM
Lu, great invented form, very inspiring, lovely poem and wonderful example for your new contest, I am starting work on mine today, very challenging I think in finding all the rhyming words, but I can and I will do it !
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 7:33:00 AM
Sorry for late response! You did do it, and did it perfectly :)- thank you sweet Dear Heart x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/8/2016 2:12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning one, Laura:) 5 monorhymes with restricted syllables and superb quality too, wow!!! An unquestionable 10:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 7:32:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Jo! x:-)-luloo

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