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Time flies by on tiptoed feet caressing tender and weathered cheek Stuttering steps turn to confident strides then back again Only a whisper in the moment No time to own it A laugh, a prayer And, the friendship comes to the inevitable end To wonder if you had meaning or worth What it meant Your time on Earth Were your footprints in stone Or cast in sand Washed away by the ocean tide Did you cast a shadow on that great wall Or were you a mist barely noticed at all A faded memory Your last ride

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Date: 5/11/2016 12:31:00 PM
- Hi Gloria - Thanks for your first poems, interesting and well written:) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:15:00 AM
Gloria, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:35:00 PM
Gloria, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/10/2016 6:30:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Gloria. :)
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Date: 5/10/2016 6:14:00 AM
Gloria, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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