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Mud Splatters - Haiku

giant rain unleashed cracked thirsty earth sipping drops mud splatters

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/20/2011 4:19:00 PM
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Lots of good strong consonants in this one for sound of heavy rain and mud! Nicely done.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/20/2011 8:51:00 AM
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I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Teresita. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Deb Wilson
Date: 1/20/2011 4:28:00 AM
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Feel i can see this with this vivd description..love,Deb
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Eiken Laan
Date: 1/20/2011 3:56:00 AM
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wow, this has a lot of energy in it:))
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Anthony Nutter
Date: 1/20/2011 3:02:00 AM
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Excellent Haiku, one feels the pelting rain.....
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/20/2011 2:45:00 AM
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Nice pen picture of the heavy rain, Teresita
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