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Mr. Moon and Ms. Night

An August night waits, For the setting of the sun. Sparkles light her eyes, When sunset has begun. A romantic ambiance, Moon nestles with the night. Waiting to cast his love, Of radiating light. Reflections over waters, The moon blushes with a glow. Embracing one another with, The love they both bestow. A secret rendezvous, Between Ms. lady night. Dancing with her love, As his poem's, he recites.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/8/2011 11:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Raul please bring me some new ones to read. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:32:00 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2009 8:34:00 PM
Unique.
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Date: 10/17/2009 7:39:00 AM
Another gem--the way you described the sun,the sunset,the moon,the night..a beautiful love story.. another favourite,excellent-Charma
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:54:00 PM
This is wonderful, Raul! Great imagery and lovely flowing rhyme! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/15/2009 1:13:00 PM
Raul, this is a delight to read >> James
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:24:00 AM
This is going to my favs Raul. You did a wonderful job on this poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:52:00 AM
Enjoyable little romance it brought to the night skies!! And all the stars are witness!!
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:51:00 AM
Great idea put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:09:00 AM
And what a poem it is, well crafted and a delight to read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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