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Mother Pearl

You lie beautiful treasure on the bottom of the seabed mother of the ocean Whispering motions sail away in shades of a rainbow spray colours you beautiful kissed by the sea upon the sands nurtured waves goodbye your remains Upon the sand dead beauty pleasing on the naked eye still so beautiful a treasure one can see beholding

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/8/2013 7:25:00 PM

I love the story of a mother creating something so beautiful and then letting it go to fly on it's own. Very, very beautiful!...By the way, I had my Mom read this poem! And, she thought it was a very touching story, as well!....Thank you for suggesting this one. And, thanks for all of the sweet comments on my work. I deeply appreciate all of them!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/9/2013 6:43:00 PM

I am also on another site called Poetry Nation. But, not a lot was happening there, lately. I discovered Poetry Soup, and I joined about a month ago.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/9/2013 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, I will have to check that out someday!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 4:21:00 PM

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