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Golden ray of sun tickles the slender stem and the lotus smiles pink! Early morning dew catches the ray, Lo! Rainbow in the blade of grass! Tiny sparrow chirps, Thanking God for wondrous life. A new day is here. 14th October 2015

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Date: 10/15/2015 5:54:00 PM
I like Ian's idea for you too. The imagery is wonderful. You could add a few more words and do it free verse.
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Ajitha Sharma
Date: 10/15/2015 10:45:00 PM
thank you Andrea..:)
Date: 10/15/2015 5:53:00 PM
just beautiful, all three
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