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All I asked for was love to be real and mold my heart like it was Potter's clay. But I question, is it love that folks feel, or are competing emotions at play? Is love a dream, fragile as papier-mache, a collage of hopes that easily fray? I tried family; though I'd find love there, and yet, nothing was there but tears and pain. Never having felt loved, it seemed unfair that I kept failing again and again. I knew naught affection, only disdain, whatever hopes I gleaned were all in vain. I looked to friends for love to no avail, for though love sprang from their lips, it was lies. I believed love to be a fairytale until we met, and you opened my eyes. You taught me love is genuine, sweetheart, now I can't imagine being apart. Having found love is like living a dream, I'm so happy I want to shout and scream.

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Date: 5/15/2019 8:45:00 AM
Fun form and interesting how it allowed you to explore the subject of love. Must give Lullo’s form a try. SuZ
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Date: 5/15/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/29/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thanks for the example, and likewise the message. God bless you.
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Date: 3/29/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/29/2019 4:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem fro a wonderful poet..I am honored you used my created form. Thank you very much sweet Emile :)-luloo
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Date: 3/29/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Lu Loo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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