Moonlight Is Waiting

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In the almond trees down on Clear Lake farm, A picnic between the rows, on grasses green, And pink blossoms play in the carefree breeze, With backdrop of blue skies and clouds of cream. Lost to each other and the golden afternoon, While the sun drifts past in search of forever, As hued birds joyously chirp their serenade, Pale moonlight awaits its nightly endeavor!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2020 2:12:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Evelyn ... we do not need music ... we can listen to the birds in this poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/28/2020 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for your inspiring thoughts on this verse, Anne-Lise. hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/28/2020 1:11:00 AM

This is gorgeous poetry. It stresses the senses of beauty. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/28/2020 9:44:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/27/2020 8:40:00 PM

The first line grabbed my attention and I was not disappointed, Evelyn. Really nice! Very descriptive.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/27/2020 8:52:00 PM

Your very nice comment is so much appreciated, Daniel. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/27/2020 8:27:00 PM

Oh, Evelyn, your poem is absolutely beautiful in its sensory and romantic imagery. The musical piece accompanying your poem perfectly compliments a golden afternoon where lovers are lost to each other.. and your last line is divine. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/27/2020 8:55:00 PM

Your warm words are so wonderful to read, Susan. I'm really glad you liked my poem. Thank you very much, my friend.