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Mirrored Lake

swans in pale moonlight mated pair on mirrored lake... croaking frogs mayhem Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Posted on July 23, 2020

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Date: 8/5/2020 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful scene and sounds...TAH
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Date: 8/2/2020 5:12:00 AM
congrats on your win, Jenna.
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:55:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/28/2020 12:08:00 PM
Oh I love the magical vibes in your muse Jenna! Congratulations on your win :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Jenna.. Congrats on your great win..
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 7:36:00 PM
I like this one a lot, Jenna. So well done. Congrats in the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 4:10:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 3:59:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 7/26/2020 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 7/26/2020 9:31:00 AM
Back with congrats, Jenna, way to go! Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, John.
Date: 7/24/2020 12:06:00 PM
Great juxtaposition. ~ Ribid
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/24/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for croaking your compliment my way. :)
Date: 7/24/2020 12:37:00 AM
You take one there, wonderful haiku
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/24/2020 11:01:00 AM
How very kind are your sentiments, Harry. Thank you.
Date: 7/23/2020 1:31:00 PM
very beautifully written Jenna! Well done indeed
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark!
Date: 7/23/2020 1:30:00 PM
So lovely--good haiku, Jenna. Janice
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice.
Date: 7/23/2020 12:21:00 PM
Wonderful, romantic imagery, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely remarks, Vijay.
Date: 7/23/2020 11:42:00 AM
- A beautiful picture in your haiku, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:57:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, and thank you for such kind words. Hugs to you.
Date: 7/23/2020 10:50:00 AM
A mated pair by a mirrored lake in the moonlight, I love this romantic image, Jenna. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:57:00 AM
hmmm...I'll suggest that to the swan. I'm not kissing a croaker.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/23/2020 11:48:00 AM
Perhaps if you kiss the frog he will turn into a prince...said the frog.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
It's a very tranquil and romantic scene in my mind, too, John. Then those darn frogs broke the spell. lol Thanks.
Date: 7/23/2020 8:42:00 AM
stunning imagery Jenna i adore swans they are so elegant:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for the compliments, Jan...hugs

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