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The softness of your skin is nothing compared to the softness in the mirrors that star your eyes Giving back so brightly How you see me: Bright stars in an impeccable sky of soft shining moonlight. Can you feel how I see you? When my skin touches yours And melts together as one warm blanket against the starless, clouded winter? *** Copyright © Darren White October 6, 2016

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Date: 4/26/2017 9:20:00 AM
I love it when poets like you see the moon and stars in places that are not their natural habitat. The stars are in more places that just the night sky. Lovely. John
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Date: 4/25/2017 10:48:00 PM
Lovely soft and romantic, it reads like a sweet melody :) xomo
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 11:51:00 PM
Merci, ma mo :)
Date: 4/25/2017 3:08:00 AM
I love this. Kai
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 3:23:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/24/2017 5:36:00 PM
Love is magic; we ALL need & celebrate true love. Darren, may yours always reach the STARS. Anil Deo (yes, shalom!)
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful words :)
Date: 4/24/2017 5:31:00 AM
An enchanted evening under the stars. This is lovely Darren. 7 ; )
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Darren White
Date: 4/25/2017 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Connie, also for the 7 :)
Date: 4/24/2017 1:12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one- just something about me and stars. So creative in every way Darren. a7+++
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 1:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria. Me and stars, I feel the same way :)
Date: 4/23/2017 3:58:00 AM
A shining example of your creative work, my friend! Very touching!
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 4:34:00 AM
Thanks, Budgie :)

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