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Monoku Red On White

my bleeding heart dripping on the white canvas the red sun sinks alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2018 8:47:00 PM
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Another wow monoku. Silent One's contest sure garnered many inspiring poems. Love this, Rick. Congratulations on the win.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/5/2018 4:19:00 PM
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Sadly beautiful and deep Rick. Stunning imagery.. Congratulations for your excellent win.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/5/2018 12:38:00 PM
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beautiful dear Rick! :) -luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/5/2018 3:45:00 AM
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Beautiful and deep ... Congratulations on your excellent win ...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2018 12:17:00 PM
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- Hi Rick, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/4/2018 11:31:00 AM
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So Sad, well done Rick, congratulations...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/4/2018 11:05:00 AM
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Deep. Congrats on your well deserved win, Rick.
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 9:11:00 AM
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Excellent rendition, Rick! One of the best I've read. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 1/4/2018 7:55:00 AM
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Very deep.. Congratulations on your first place in the colours monoku contest
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/3/2018 6:23:00 PM
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Excellent monoku, Rick - good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
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Wow, so excellent!!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2018 2:10:00 PM
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Fantastic imagery Rick, excellent Senryu, my best to you! xomo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2018 12:58:00 PM
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- A great one, Rick - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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