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Monoku

august wind fades at twilight two darting swift's sing a farewell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Lu Loo
Date: 8/23/2016 4:02:00 PM
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Rick, this is so beautiful...well done and congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/22/2016 9:36:00 AM
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Yes,fall is here!Congrats Rick on your placement!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/22/2016 6:49:00 AM
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I see why this came in first place. Brilliant Rick! I have to fave this! Congratulations on your top win. 7 ; )
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2016 1:45:00 AM
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You prrsent a lovely image, Rick! Congratulations on placing first. Regards ... paul
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/21/2016 10:50:00 PM
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Congrats on your 1st place with this wonderful words. :) Sunita
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/21/2016 8:45:00 PM
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Rick, perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2016 8:12:00 PM
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awesome imagery. BIG congrats, Rick
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 7:22:00 PM
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Rick, congratulations on your 1st Place win in the Monoku contest! Wonderful imagery. Sandra
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2016 5:34:00 PM
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Dropping back with my congrats Rick I really loved this one and am delighted to see it get a 1st place:-) hugs Jan xx
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Alexis Y.
Date: 8/21/2016 4:26:00 PM
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Hi Rick, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2016 3:54:00 PM
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Really enjoyed this Rick, congrats on a fine win!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2016 11:12:00 AM
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Rick, this is beautiful, best of luck in the contest (ps-- I sent you a soupie mail just now)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2016 9:15:00 AM
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Wonderful imagery especially of the migrating birds:-) A delight to read this today Rick:-) hugs jan xx7
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Rick Parise
Date: 8/19/2016 6:36:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan ()()() Love & Light

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