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Monoku 3 - Air

like life-giving air ~ she breathes in your male essence and exhales virtue Written 12/31/17 Contest: Monoku 3 Hosted by Silent One

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:35:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Rhoda - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/5/2018 4:25:00 AM

Garsh. Thank you, Gregory. I'm humbled, my Dear.

Edward Mccall

Date: 1/4/2018 12:07:00 PM

Congrats on a great win my friend well deserved to be sure.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/5/2018 4:24:00 AM

Awww. Thank you, Edward.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Rhoda, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/3/2018 9:00:00 AM

Awww. Thank you so much Eve. Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 9:39:00 AM

Well done, Rhoda. Congrats on your win.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/2/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thank you, Line.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/2/2018 8:58:00 AM

Back to say congrats, my friend. Keep exhaling that virtue...

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/2/2018 1:07:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, John. Virttuuuueeeeee......

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/2/2018 5:27:00 AM

Lovely and warm, Rhoda ... Congratulations on your happy win ...

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/2/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thank you, Probir!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/2/2018 3:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this one, Rhoda,

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/2/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thank you, Barry!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/1/2018 5:00:00 PM

Lovely to see you climbing the ladder of success, Rhoda:) Pleased to be back with congratulations!! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 5:16:00 PM

Paul, my Dear, success is dependent upon whom be the teacher. This be why I started following your account when I started on the Soup. I knew that if I found a talented mentor, I could become educated in the art of poetry. I chose you. You have not let me down. Thank you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2018 4:45:00 PM

Rhonda such an enticing monoku. Congratulations for your wonderful win with your excellent poem.. ~Susan

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/3/2018 9:01:00 AM

Actually, it's my second, second.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. I was very happy to hear of my placement. My first second. lol.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:49:00 PM

Back with congrats for ya, and a happy new year 2018

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 4:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I am so pleased with my placement. It's a great way to begin a new year. Thank you very much for your support

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:45:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Rhoda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 2:31:00 PM

Awwww...garsh...I'm so humbled. It's my highest placement yet. I'm so excited! Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:15:00 PM

Great image... Great one liner Rhoda..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 2:30:00 PM

Seriously? Cool! I'm so happy right now! (Does a happy dance, twirls in circles, and highfives my daughter) Thank you!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/1/2018 7:44:00 AM

Metaphorically beautiful, creative and sensual, Rhoda. In my books, a sure winner:) Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. You are very kind.

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/1/2018 2:00:00 AM

Nicely done, Rhoda, should do well. Viv x

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/1/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Viv. Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2017 7:26:00 PM

wow, what a great metaphor, Rhoda. Sure to do well in Silent One's contest.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, Dear. Happy New Year

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/31/2017 12:00:00 PM

- Well done, Rhonda - Luck in the contest - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Happy New Year and double the hugs in return. (I'm one upping lol)

James Swartz

Date: 12/31/2017 10:02:00 AM

That's my kind of lady! Great write Rhoda!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:56:00 PM

Happy New Year as well!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:53:00 PM

I changed the "I" to "she" because I got scared. Lmao. (Such a chicken, I am.) So anyways, thank you for the compliment. Ha! Virtuueeeeee

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2017 8:21:00 AM

Sultry penning Rhoda! Love it :) my best to you! xomo

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Happy New Year. XOMO (not sure what that means but I'm sending it back). Lol

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/31/2017 7:49:00 AM

Very potent one liner..nicely done, Rhoda.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay for your support of my writing. Happy New Year.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/31/2017 7:49:00 AM

She's powerful... and a powerful monoku too...All the best Rhoda

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 1:48:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Arturo. Happy New Year, Dear.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2017 6:42:00 AM

Must be quite a man. Nice.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 6:49:00 AM

Yes. One would think. Lol. Thanks, Kim. Happy New Year.

John Gondolf

Date: 12/31/2017 6:32:00 AM

Rhoda, this has a very subtle sense of sensuality to it, very nice. Happy new year to you and yours! John

John Gondolf
Date: 12/31/2017 6:57:00 AM

You, shy??? I don’t see that...

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Dear. I got a little shy and changed "I" to "she". Lol.

Joseph May

Date: 12/31/2017 5:53:00 AM

Very nicely expressed Rhoda...Happy New Year!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/31/2017 6:02:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Happy New Year to you as well!