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She misses Europe Since her anointed head’s hope Lingers goodness of land’s womb The backyard’s pale fears Massive mountains of king Leer! Kristiansand in atmosphere!? Her head is the globe Turning from left to right’s orb Her eyes tests a great fierce hop The orbit looks fluff Gyrates her green eyes’ dark puff Shifting has walloped…No bluff Could Nibiru kick?! Our dry moon on its brim? Spinning loops of sad might grim!? Could the slim band show Her aura for seeing source!? Mona Lisa revealed core Could she be so blind?! Looking far ahead of time!? Yet spell-check papers of lime!? Is the great sun here? Nearing our solar’s fear? Spreading distance mid the sphere!? Is it here her ground?! Her bliss forehead speaks aloud? Balancing orbits’ sleek bound! Proposing harshly! Eats our sun hungrily!! Creates stern hostility!!! If picture flattens… As a narrow rectangle See two planets are closer? Reincarnated?! Wishes flamingo’s places? or loves soft belly dances? Her soft smile cried why!! Her kind eyes trickled tears’ fry Da Vinci dyed his dread eye Projecting fine art Da Vinci prized her posh card Exhuming profound seas’ chart 3 of 6 By: Nadia F. Shahwan – April 2009

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Date: 4/18/2009 6:16:00 AM
It was this suggestion of an anthropological study that drew me to your writing first ... I love anthropology, archeology, and I still a student of ethnology ... hence my invitiation for you to read Dambui Lui Gaf ... and my expose of its myth. I hope you google it some day ... one cannot be a magnificient student of Da Vinci's work as you are without some curiosity of the Christian periphery. Love always
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Date: 4/8/2009 10:54:00 AM
i love your style, nadia. the atmosphere you create is awesome. mark x
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:34:00 AM
Nadio, the revision poses even more mystrious questions. I do believe Da Vinci intended for this work to provoke such questions. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2009 3:38:00 PM
Hello Gifted Nadia~It was good to hear from You dear!!!:):)~This is a very intriguing and interesting write upon Mona Lisa~Filled with many creative images which bear thoughts unto its readers minds, that could entail many different possible renderings of conclusive thoughts!? These are the types of writes which I would liken to abstract painting within some degree!? Smile~"Wonderful Art Dear!!!":):)~"Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours,' John!!!:):) Bye Nadia ~
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:24:00 PM
Brilliant series Nadia, I enjoyed its' entirety. Fabulous work in choka...Raul
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Date: 4/7/2009 10:45:00 AM
Your series is as provocative as the painting itself. You weave a brilliant mystery! Excellent work, Nadia!
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