Mmm, Lady

So pert in shadow Moonlit blue against the black Cobalt silhouette http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-9.php

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Richard Pickett

Date: 5/11/2010 7:48:00 AM

I love the smell of Cobalt in the morning...Nicely penned...Thanks for the kind comments....God Bless...Taz

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/9/2010 3:43:00 PM

Great write using my favorite color...Cobalt Blue...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Date: 5/8/2010 6:39:00 PM

Good use of imagery to paint a picture with words. I really like the last line. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2010 6:26:00 PM

NICE ONE , I ALSO WANT TO CONGRATULATE YOU ON YOUR 1ST PLACE IN THE OPP-SEX. A WONDERFUL POEM,,IRMA

Patty Lane

Date: 5/8/2010 4:31:00 PM

I like this ... even tho I have no clue what a senyu is. Does it have anything to do with a color format? Anyway, I picture a woman standing at the window, lit by moonlight in a dark room. Patty