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Missed Your Loving Delight

love was raining all the time day and night my heart was flying from your distant sight i was going high up you just touched me then woke up and missed your loving delight My first poem in the form of: Rubai Inspired by: Pashang Salehi

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/17/2016 9:00:00 AM

No!!! Missed... Such a romantic, tragic poem.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/17/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:57:00 PM

- Dear Bl, this is beautiful ! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/8/2016 1:07:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful 7 with beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/6/2016 6:13:00 PM

Thank you BL.... This is great, beautifully done.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/7/2016 10:13:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your inspirational comment previously given to me. i just tried and done with your inspiration. This is dedicated to you. i always learn from you and all the beautiful poets and poetesses of our beautiful Poetrysoup. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/6/2016 12:29:00 PM

ohh, this is so sweetly conveyed, bl... enjoyed it, my friend..huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/7/2016 10:06:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl