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Miss That Touch- KIB

Listen to poem:
I breathe my sweet dreams into you,
                     c o l l i d i n g  in desire-
for you always grant me
silent stars sewn on silk blankets,
            lit by your cobalt fire-
     starving for affection.





I chose #3. “I think we miss that touch so much, that we crash into each other, just so we can feel something."


KEEP IT BRIEF Contest
Nette Onclaud
August 3, 2019


Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/31/2019 9:12:00 PM
Beautifully done Laura
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Date: 8/12/2019 4:00:00 PM
wow, really good one, and I enjoyed hearing your voice, dear. Congratulations
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2019 12:51:00 PM
thanks lovely lady :) I've been tinkering with it lately... :)-lulo
Date: 8/12/2019 5:47:00 AM
Excellent Lu, great write my dear...Congratulations on your top win.. hugs Charlie :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2019 12:51:00 PM
many thanks dear man :) :)-luloo
Date: 8/12/2019 12:04:00 AM
Congrats Lu Loo to win top on your beautiful poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2019 12:51:00 PM
thank you sweet Anisha! :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2019 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful write Lu Loo, Congrats on your win..
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 8:27:00 PM
thank you dear Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2019 5:33:00 PM
Your entry is excellent Luloo! Congratulations on your deserving First placement! xxoo
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 6:13:00 PM
thank you lovely Connie:) You are sweet as always :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2019 4:09:00 PM
Lu Loo, I think this is one of your best poem ever. So glad you got top honors with this. Congrats.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 5:02:00 PM
aww thank you, that was super sweet :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2019 2:47:00 PM
such a fluid, astounding work, lou...a pleasure to have you in my contest... sweet congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 5:02:00 PM
I am so very honored sweet Nette, I loved this contest. Thank you so much :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2019 1:17:00 AM
Nicely penned emotion.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 5:01:00 PM
thank you sweet Jeanne :)-luloo
Date: 8/3/2019 12:10:00 PM
I think you are probably right about our needing the touch. Beautiful lines you write: "silent stars sewn on silk blankets."
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/11/2019 5:01:00 PM
thank you! sorry for late response...:) -luloo