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Once We Were Lovers

When I reviewed her face I had not conscious who She was... I noticed with amazement that: Her enchanted birds they didn't fly anymore ... Her golden dreams, borrowed from moss They were... Her challenging claws no nails left ... Its pinnacle wings, heavy lead ... Her smile triumphant, wiped out... We said nothing, I said nothing, she nothing ... We were simply ... strangers ... We were not who we realized...!

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Date: 1/18/2021 4:29:00 PM
Hello Alakas, you both were not suited for each other. Nothing in common. Salute Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2021 11:28:00 AM
Hello Alakas, yes it is hard to forget I agree. It will take time to forget. It will take time . Salute Darlene.
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Date: 1/20/2021 5:18:00 AM
Simple to explain, but hard to forget ! thank you to comment ! salute alkas

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