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Mirrored Thoughts - With Red Fiery

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In another time and age we could have written a new page crossing paths on land or sea brushing cheeks with destiny. With youthful zest and joy our ardent quills employ to mix your ink with mine with passion so divine and then the words would flow to set each heart aglow. If our souls could sing and rhyme beyond the horizon of time to mirror our words with perfection with utmost sincerity and affection to bring distinct colours and shades we seal a bond that will not fade as we reach for eternity bathing in blissful affinity. Mirrored thoughts on a new page in another time and age. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ A Paul Callus & Red Fiery collaboration © 2016

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/28/2016 3:39:00 AM

Dear Paul, An outstanding piece. Nice concept & brilliant lay out..............//:) hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Manmath; your comments are always heartening. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/26/2016 7:43:00 AM

A TRULY AWESOME COLLAB! Such a pleasure to read this morn my friends. A7 Added to my fav list.. thanks

Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you for being always so supportive, Robert. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/19/2016 4:36:00 AM

beautiful images from the mirror. congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2016 8:21:00 AM

Once again, thank you Mohan for the visits you paid me today...much appreciated. ~ All the best. // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/16/2016 5:03:00 PM

A 7 for sure, Paul. This is excellent. Janice

Paul Callus
Date: 5/17/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thank you for the 'excellent' comment and the 7 rating, Janice! Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2016 12:01:00 AM

In another time and age..I always wonder what my life would have been like in the past or future. Lovely poem indeed..Excellent-both of you.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/14/2016 10:10:00 AM

There are moments when we can't help using 'what and if'. Nowadays I mostly think of what's become of people I used to know many years ago! Thank you for the positive comments, Charm! ~ Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/13/2016 2:27:00 AM

wonderful, soulful collaboration.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 11:24:00 AM

I'm pleased to have you stopping by, Mohan! Thank you for contributing with your lovely remarks! ~ Regards // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/13/2016 2:07:00 AM

What could have been! ALWAYS a question of Symetry! Love the mirror images and the fun with rhyme back-and-fourth you two! Good one!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:48:00 AM

And I love your lovely feedback, Edlynn:) ... you caught on to all the main points! ~ Regards // paul

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/13/2016 1:21:00 AM

Very, very pleasant to read this. Excellent collaboration and meaningful work.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:49:00 AM

Thank you, Mark; your comments are lovely and encouraging. ~ All the best. // paul

Red Fiery

Date: 5/13/2016 1:07:00 AM

I am so glad that Paul collaborated with me...!!! Thank you friends for your kind appreciation..This was a wonderful experience ...Hugs to all of you :) Red

Red Fiery
Date: 5/16/2016 8:41:00 AM

Thank you dearest:)I would love to mix my ink with you again.. And always...hugs Red

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Red....the pleasure was mine!! Maybe we could repeat the experience one of these days:) Hugs ~~ paul

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/12/2016 4:55:00 PM

This collaboration is written "with passion so divine!" This is heartfelt! My admiration to you both!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:43:00 AM

Your admiration is truly appreciated, Walter!! Thank you. // paul