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Mini-Vacation

Short but meaningful Let it be a hideaway Full with fresh and serene thoughts Away from the ever evolving changes! Brief, I know though memorable A stint stay swayed in my heart From lingering homesickness Stationary until it is dynamic again! Emptying my mind Is what I needed most!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 8:01:00 PM

Excellent final line to go with your mini-vacation poem. WE ALL need this, sweetie.(oh, and I see NIkko also mentioned my very short vacation to you!)

John Rhinem

Date: 3/24/2012 9:16:00 AM

Smile ˜ Silent Serenity * No Doubt My Dear Precious & Beautiful Dalila ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/24/2012 9:14:00 AM

Ah, I think we all need these "mini-vacations"-- if only to free our mind and start anew :) Really enjoy what you say here, I am happy for you that you are having these mini-vacations-- you and me both-- and it is refreshing! Andrea is still in Iowa, hopefully we see her back here after the weekend-- It rained here today== medyo malakas kaya ayan, sobrang Init ngayon! Sending you smiles and hugs & love :) Thanks for passing by my blog, you were my sweet surprise there :)

Date: 3/24/2012 9:19:00 AM

Smile ˜ Precious Little Nikko * Look At The Baby!:) ˜