Midnight Serenade - Ziket

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the moon at my window love in the air AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on August 8, 2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/9/2020 5:07:00 PM

I think that these zikets are going to not just replace haikus, but steamroll them into oblivion. Really great, Line! Light and Hope, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/10/2020 6:11:00 AM

That would put an end to so much bickering over haiku rules ~

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/9/2020 4:15:00 PM

Truly beautiful dear LIne ~ a special time. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/10/2020 6:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Ann ~

Jack Horne

Date: 8/9/2020 4:08:00 AM

oh, so much said in such a short piece - I agree with Andrea, absolutely beautiful

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thanks, Jack ~ much appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:51:00 AM

Beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated~