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Midnight Delight, Second Version

MIDNIGHT DELIGHT (SECOND VERSION) When the moon is young and full We gaze and count the stars above Every glimpse and twinkle Meant another promise Every time I hold back my breath It would seem new life is making alive To redeem the fall of yesteryears This time, I wish I wouldn’t wake and this come true I hold your hands You hold mine too Every spell of words are like magic Till glorious and amorous feeling Dwell in both of us!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/29/2011 7:13:00 PM
gosh, I can't say which I like better. WEll, this one said a few more thing you couldn't say in a haiku. That made it very nice.
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:14:00 AM
wonderfully flowing free verse, Dalila. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2011 2:55:00 PM
Delighted to see you posted here today Dalila. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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