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Message In a Bottle

A girl and her boyfriend walking along the beach a bottle washes ashore grazing their feet; as you and I slowly walk by we notice the bottle and are quite surprised; years ago, we let that bottle go and now in their hands they hold your drawing and my poem! we told them you drew it, I recited my poem we truly stunned them they couldn't believe it! carefully folding the poem and art and adding something, they drew a heart; we sealed the bottle threw it out to sea yet another moment in history

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Date: 12/2/2012 7:23:00 PM
Melani, ,,.. it is nice to read this oldie and goody poem.... :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, ..always~ PD
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