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Mermaid

The Son of Land and Daughter of Sea I wish to give you a gift, says she, And without a thought he does agree. He loves her for her singing pure and beauty so divine. She in the water, he, on the sand; She beckons with a dewy hand; She sweeps him from his precious land. He loves her more than worldly life, all things on Earth combined. He is caressed by chilly waves He attempts to, for her, the oceans brave He sinks into his watery grave. He loves her sorely, soaring, torn, forsaking air for strangling brine. Deep and dark the ocean grows, Down where a mermaid’s lover goes- To her home to decompose This truth any good seaman knows. A Mer is anything but benign.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/16/2016 11:27:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Roni. :)
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Date: 6/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Roni , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/15/2016 2:18:00 AM
A very nice list poem, Roni, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/15/2016 12:22:00 AM
Sparks of creativity ... enjoyed reading .... a nice poem...a beautiful contour in " he sinks into his watery grave" ....
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