Me-Time

I need some me-time, Let things be-time, Burden-free-time To unwind. But such flee-time, Absentee-time, Filled with glee-time I can’t find. So my plea, time, Please agree, time; Or you’ll see, time, I’ll lose my mind.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2014 1:15:00 PM

The only true 'me' time i get is when I got to hospice for my free aromatherapy massage - an hour of pure bliss focused entirely on me - excellent write Ilene:-) hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:21:00 PM

for me, an hour of just reading or doing a crossword puzzle would do the trick. i'm finally having a little time to catch up. thanks for reading and commenting, jan...

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/27/2014 9:22:00 AM

Rhyme time is not what you lack. You just need to get back on track. Your plea to have a minute alone where you aren't bothered by the phone. Uninterrupted, calm and content. I'm guessing this is what you meant. Don't look to me, my mind is spent. Peace. :)

Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:20:00 PM

hey robert! i always carve out a little time to write a poem but i've fallen behind in almost everything else. been doing a lot of extra baby-sitting for henry (which you know i love doing) and it leaves me not enough time for myself. thanks for your constant support...

David Meade

Date: 11/26/2014 9:37:00 PM

This is outstanding . . . you should get a day pass for this one!! Enjoyed our time.

Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:19:00 PM

thank you, david! today i'm catching up on things and enjoying my me-time. i appreciate your taking the time to comment...