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Martian's Holiday.

On Earth I stepped for the very first time, And my 3 hearts wouldn't slow down, The sight of so much water, It makes my green face frown. Oh how you Earthlings are lucky, With your technology but little brains, Suprisingly you have very few ligaments, No wonder your close to insane. I went for a walk in the city, With many structures tall, I saw some metal creatures, Who had an alarming call. The people around me are different, To the people near the sea, They carry around a case in there hands, It must be there battery. There are oodles of different boxes, When there button is pressed there is light, And millions of figures appear on the screen, This is much to my delight. But now its time to go home, And tell my people of my adventure. "But there is no such thing as aliens" they say To believe they must truly venture.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/23/2009 9:26:00 AM
I like this planet, that's why I stayed. Creative write. Vince
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:46:00 AM
I'm smiling with a little chuckle going on, too. This is a delightfully entertaining, poem. I hope I see more like this in the future. It brightened me, today. I love your imagination. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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