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Mars

Shining like a bright red gem lighting up the night with a dreamy haze, So inviting and so far away yet it's like going home; Leaving all the pain and death behind for a new beginning, begging humanity to get it right this time A new place to start over; Earth a distant past, Ready for the future Mars shines like a bright red gem glowing with hope for Peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2015 1:30:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Melani! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:03:00 AM
A lovely piece of verse, Melani, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:06:00 PM
MELANI Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:29:00 PM
beautiful imagery Melani - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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