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Marriage (For: "give Wisdom It's Beauty a Couple of Lines" Contest Sponsored By: John Freeman)

Marriage Beneath the moon two lovers share their dreams. Before daylight blinds an eternity of sunbeams. © July 12, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 8:11:00 AM

Congrats on the 5th place win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2010 9:32:00 PM

Congratulations on this very optimistic one! LUv, Andrea

Date: 7/13/2010 3:17:00 PM

What an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form.. enjoy another big win my friend.. so well deserved.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 6:56:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 3:57:00 AM

Relationships change when light is shed on differences. Can relate to this one, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 7/13/2010 3:38:00 AM

AWESOME! Dane Ann. A winner fo sure. Love, Lainie. PS - you are in my prayers always. Love, Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 12:56:00 AM

Dane, I happy to see your moving about back in the circuit again. agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2010 7:31:00 PM

A wonderful thought on marriage and entry to the contest. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 4:01:00 PM

Very poignant and powerful words Dane Ann .. good luck in the new contest.. speaks volumes in couplet form.. my friend.. with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2010 2:57:00 PM

Great couplet of lines...Good luck in the contest..Should be in the winners' cirlce...Sara