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Enchantment

The enchantment of our magical moment Epitomized an intoxicating aura The dancing of our minds and bodies Through sprinkles of angel dust in the air The enchantment of our magical moment When true love ignited deep in our hearts Only ours to share June 22, 2018 Seven Lines Of Romantic Heaven Contest by Silent One Second Place

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/30/2018 6:25:00 PM

Only ours to share. The very point of love Nice Susan Well written

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/7/2018 2:45:00 AM

Thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2018 8:09:00 PM

Susan, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/27/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2018 7:13:00 AM

Congrats on a well deserved win Susan. A lovely romantic poem.

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/26/2018 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Mansi Sharma

Date: 6/25/2018 2:56:00 PM

Ohh the magical Sparks! Congratulations! :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/25/2018 3:14:00 PM

Why, thank you! :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/25/2018 11:38:00 AM

Big congrats, Susan, on your win! What a lovely romantic piece! Hugs. Pandita

Roy Pett

Date: 6/25/2018 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, beautifully written and certainly enchanting. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/25/2018 7:22:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations for your win Susan :)

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 6:38:00 AM

Sounds magical.. Nothing like true love.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/23/2018 11:18:00 AM

Ahh, you have written a really lovely poem, I am sure that will do good in the contest, good luck

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 7:57:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 6:00:00 PM

Heavenly indeed, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 1:22:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/22/2018 3:19:00 PM

Heaven is now populated by your fine poem. I especially like the last line. The implications are so profound, methinks: 'Selfishness' is so often thought to be 100% bad or even evil. Yet in this case, it's 100% good, isn't it?! ...As the Sage wrote: '...Do not mock any thing,...for every thing has its place.' (In the original Hebrew, 'place' also indicates the location of Heaven!) :) gw

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 1:21:00 AM

Thank you! :)