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Magic Soup

Magic Soup Old lady at the door Young man walking bye Lady you got food to spare Come inside young man I have a plan See this stone I behold this is magic Fill my cauldron full of water go to well I will cast a magic spell light a fire over there Put cauldron on to fire magic stone dropped inside Grab that chicken running around pluck chop drop inside Go to garden get potatoes and veg to feed the magic stone Keep moving the stick around listen to the magic stone The young man was feeling tired after all the running he had done Stop and taste the magic soup eat and drink all you can The young boy grabbed a bowl best chicken soup he ever had Thank you mam for magic soup ha ha the old lady said Young man takeout the stone and trough it away you did all the work today

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/7/2017 8:17:00 AM

Good one! That's some way to get someone to do some work! Enjoyed the read, Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 8/7/2017 4:36:00 PM

Hi Eileen , nice to meet ,, sure is lol :)) hugs from Ireland

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/15/2017 11:02:00 PM

This is a very good rhyme :) thanks for coming to read my words :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/21/2017 4:32:00 PM

Hi Debbie , thanks for comment:)))hugs

Lewis Raynes

Date: 6/8/2017 3:27:00 PM

What a great little magic story u wrote here, top stuff. :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/8/2017 11:16:00 PM

Hi Lewis , glad you enjoyed , have yourself a magical day today :)))))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2017 4:07:00 AM

- Enjoy your soup, Niall - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/1/2017 11:52:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , lol the old lady worked the socks of the little boy:))) hugs

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/31/2017 10:51:00 PM

:) good one!

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/1/2017 11:51:00 AM

Hi Becca , bit of fun lol:))) hugs

Bette Bavington

Date: 5/31/2017 2:49:00 PM

Interesting. I remember as a child growing up a story about the magic rock and how it feed a village of people. Condensing the story was a super idea. Thank you for sharing.

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/31/2017 3:30:00 PM

Hi Bette , nice to meet , thanks for comment :)) hugs from Ireland