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Oh, look, Dad. Where’s this magic place? It’s got so much great stuff to see. I like those little cars that race. They’re great. I’ve seen ‘em on TV. You put this on your phone for ME? That Play Doh set comes with a box of shaping things. I want them bad. I wish I had those building blocks. That huge green ball would make me glad, that wagon too. Look at it, Dad! Because of Walmart’s handy app, Dad always knows about the top Kids’ toys. His tot begins to clap. At “Magic Place” they soon will stop and shop for bargains till they drop! April 2, 2021 entered in the Look at This Place poetry contest Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Date: 4/5/2021 5:42:00 PM
This Dad sure is courageous. Either that or he's got a 'money tree' in his backyard. Nicely penned, Janice. Sweet! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/9/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
Date: 4/2/2021 7:42:00 PM
Hi Janice, It was so cool that dad was able to take him to his “ magic” place. Well done. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/2/2021 9:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Jance

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