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~Mountains~ (Double Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 February.11.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Author's Notes : The " Choka " is a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Date: 2/12/2017 12:40:00 PM
- A beautiful picture you have painted with your pen, Dorian - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 4:07:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem:)Deeply appreciate it all dear friend and the 7 also.I'm so glad you liked this one.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

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