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Lynn Marie

Lynn Marie? If you read this, can you please see All the attempts from me to thee In Soupmail, for I long to be talking to you, sitting on my knees Just you and me, under a tree Eating pie and drinking tea Admiring butterflies, killing fleas...... Whaddayasay, Lynn Marie? *** May 6, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Niall Fulham
Date: 5/10/2017 11:36:00 AM
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Hi Darren , I really like this write it is nice and light , ' eating pie and drinking tea ' that is my favorite passtime my friend :)))
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Darren White
Date: 5/10/2017 11:44:00 AM
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Hehe, and killing fleas too? ;) Thanks Niall!
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Carole Duet
Date: 5/7/2017 12:11:00 PM
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Don't delete it, Darren. It's tooo cute...although I have a phobia about bugs!
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Darren White
Date: 5/7/2017 12:55:00 PM
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hehe, okay then!
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Maria Williams
Date: 5/7/2017 7:12:00 AM
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It was going so beautifully there till you mentioned the fleas, good luck doing that yourself Lol!! Maria
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Maria Williams
Date: 5/7/2017 7:27:00 AM
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No I love it , its fun, perhaps chasing bees??
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Darren White
Date: 5/7/2017 7:19:00 AM
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Haha :) I'll delete this poem today btw, mission accomplished!
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/6/2017 8:20:00 PM
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she is most likely having tea with your muse.
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Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 10:57:00 PM
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LOL Tim, yeah probably.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/6/2017 4:18:00 PM
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Cute poem!!! I hope she ok!!
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Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 10:57:00 PM
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She is, mystery is solved :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/6/2017 3:16:00 PM
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Perhaps she'll pass on the killing fleas...but what do I know? ;) Good write.
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Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 3:57:00 PM
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Hehe Eileen, thank you :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/6/2017 2:16:00 PM
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Charming little write Piroet :) xomo!
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Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 2:19:00 PM
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Merci ma mo, I hope she will read it :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2017 1:38:00 PM
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ha ha those pesky fleas would ruin this special moment lol - what a lovely tribute to Lynn Marie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 1:40:00 PM
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I am trying to reach her.... I hope she reads this :)

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