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Luna's Spell

Time passes slowly as the darkness sighs And the edge of the ocean falls from view When night comes falling from the sky We'll bask in the moonlight that ensues As the edge of the ocean falls from view And the sun bids farewell We'll bask in the moonlight that ensues Enchanted in the summertime by Luna's spell As the sun bids farewell A golden loom weaves the sky and stars begin to gleam Enchanted in the summertime by Luna's spell If you need me all you have to do is dream A golden loom weaves the sky and stars will begin to gleam When night comes falling from the sky If you need me all you have to do is dream Time passes slowly as the darkness sighs - 4/5/18 Music Pantoum Contest Sponsor-- Silent One Artist: Bob Dylan Titles: All you have to do is dream Edge of the ocean Farewell Golden Loom In the Summertime Moonligt Time passes Slowly When night comes falling from the Sky

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Date: 4/17/2018 1:53:00 AM
Hey, i just noticed. you have not put up a new poem for over a week. Let's see some poems, Joseph.
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Date: 4/9/2018 7:06:00 PM
Joseph, your pantoum is so beautiful. The gorgeous imagery built around the song titles flow effortlessly in your poetic lines where the song titles melt into your theme seamlessly. An awesome write. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:54:00 AM
I'm basking in the beauty of this poem! You did a great job!
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:01:00 AM
Completely enchanting Joseph :) A beautiful musical dream!
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Date: 4/7/2018 8:29:00 AM
You have woven these song titles in so well Joseph. A hard form a Pantoum, this one has Winner stamped all over it, good luck in the contest....Maria
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Date: 4/5/2018 6:14:00 PM
utterly fantastic, Joseph. Second one I read today in Silent One's contest and both are stellar.
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Date: 4/5/2018 4:56:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You did a great job weaving Dylan's song titles into this amazing Pantoum. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2018 4:05:00 PM
Scenic and lovely--a great Pantoum Joseph..best for a win.
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Date: 4/5/2018 3:07:00 PM
a poetic delight as moon and stars glimmer through your work, joseph... i am a fan of bob dylan!... huggs
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Date: 4/5/2018 2:39:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Joseph :) - (Who is the artist for the songs?) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2018 2:59:00 PM
- Bob Dylan .... of course :)
Date: 4/5/2018 2:29:00 PM
Excellent Joseph! Beautiful Pantoum.:)
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