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The midnight sky is filled with stars that sparkle 'round the bright full Moon, while mirror image on the lake so softly ripples in her glow. As crickets sing their mating song, and palm trees sway in summer's breeze, my eyes look toward the glowing sky and think about how small we are. Alone I sit on this grand night with nature 'neath this lovely sky, and watch Moon's silver shining light paint surfaces from far away. With her, I'm drifting through a void we share in this grand Universe; so close and yet so far away... she smiles at me with Luna-Love. August 5, 2018 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Beauty Of The Night Sponsor: Sotto Poet Judged: 11/17/2022

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Date: 8/18/2018 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/20/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/20/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/6/2018 8:51:00 PM
This is a perfect example of Iambic Tetrameter Sandra. I think it makes for beautiful love poems when written as a Sonnet. Yours does not have to be written as a Sonnet because it's beautiful just the way it is.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/9/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, James, for your very supportive and uplifting comments! Sandra

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