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A Summer Sunset

The blazing sunset demonstrates charisma of this summer day; a revelation to display the pulchritude that now awaits. And I adore this paragon of nature’s beauty captivate; as sun sinks in the bay at eight there’s no discomfort to dwell on. July 8, 2018 Contest: Rhyme Time 5 - Lucky 8 Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 7/31/2018 9:25:00 PM
Back to congratulate you for your win. Well done. :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/31/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/13/2018 9:14:00 PM
I love both, the sunrise and the sunset. Nature holds many inspiring moments. Your thoughts are beautiful. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/13/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, i’ve been inspired by the beauty of nature all my life, only recently I’ve started sharing my thoughts. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry. John
Date: 7/13/2018 9:39:00 AM
You did this beautifully!! Best of luck in contest. No doubt a winner. :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/13/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, I appreciate your encouragement. John
Date: 7/10/2018 4:44:00 AM
It is a really wonderful poem, good luck in the contest
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/11/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thanks, Faraz.
Date: 7/8/2018 5:01:00 PM
Hi John, I agree with Andrea, you used the chosen well and you nailed it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2018 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate your support. John
Date: 7/8/2018 4:48:00 PM
gosh, I am not sure of the rules yet, but if the idea is to fit everything into just 8 lines, wow, you nailed it, John!!!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/8/2018 11:28:00 AM
Wow!!!! John you had no problem using the 8 word.. nicely done and good luck in the contest Hugs eve
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, I appreciate it. John

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