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He glanced up to find me watching him. The moon of autumn lit up dim as swollen gray clouds began to gather in the sky. A pleasant, earthy scent the air as the breeze wisp by. Looking at the sky told us we were in for a storm. We stood silent as my lips parted, waiting for his warm touch. My nerves were tingling from the intense yummy magic radiating from him, my heart plummeted to my tummy. He wrapped an arm around me, touched my face then wrapped the other as we were locked in a passionate embrace. I couldn't help enjoying his strong arms and my head upon his heart. He lowered his head as I stood on my toes not wanting to part. He placed his lips against mine. My body came to life when our lips met, but one taste wasn't enough I had to have more. I couldn't forget. The skies spent and immediately we were soaking. We stood back looked up at the sky laughing. You've got to be joking! 10/28/2018
Poetry Contest: Tell me a story Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 10/29/2018 9:36:00 PM
Your poetic love story rains romantic enchantment and beauty, and I was soaking up every word. Superb poetry, Eve. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/29/2018 9:08:00 AM
Wow Eve, this was perfect and knowing Brenda as I do, I am sure this one will be sitting atop all others. She is going to love this enchanting story of romance and rain. I normally wish the best of luck on contest entries but I don't think you will need it at all with this. Beautifully done.
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Date: 10/29/2018 8:24:00 AM
So tender & sweet, Eve...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/29/2018 3:49:00 AM
This was a poem I needed to read tonight, thank you so much Eve!!!! so romantic.
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:40:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Eve - A perfect love story - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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