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Loving Touch - Sensual Abc For Contest

Alabaster breasts caressed delicately. Eager fingers giving her intense joy kisses lingering … moving nearer orgasmic pleasure. Quickly responding stroking, touching. Undulating vigorously wanting Xanadu yielding zealously. Contest:- Sensual ABC Sponsor:- Charlotte Jade Puddifoot 09~26~15

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:12:00 AM

Wonderful write Jan! Congrats on superb win!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/8/2015 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:50:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2015 12:49:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:44:00 PM

A sexy win Jan! Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2015 4:54:00 AM

Thanks Balveen I was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:19:00 PM

gosh, did I not even see this one yet?? This is marvelous, Jan. WAY TO GO!!! congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - I was delighted to place was way out of my comfort zone with a sensual poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 5:05:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Jan. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 5:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 4:31:00 PM

I loved your impressive first line that introduced the sensual tone to this clever ABC poem Jan. Congratulations on your great placement!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Connie I was out of my comfort zone writing this so I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Woods

Date: 10/3/2015 4:09:00 PM

Brilliant performance Jan, you tigress. ; ) Well done on your win. Sensational accomplishment especially so as it was an area you were uncomfortable in.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 4:11:00 PM

Am blushing now lol:-) I much prefer to write with humour:-) hugs jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 3:54:00 PM

jan, you say you're out of your comfort zone with this, but it certainly doesn't show! this was one of the strongest entries i received, very erotic, and i liked it from the first reading...you know i've always said you do well with short poems - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Charlotte I am not good with the sexy sultry stuff but I gave this my all and I'm so pleased you liked the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/3/2015 2:40:00 PM

Wow, very sensual, Jan! Excellent word choices! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2015 3:31:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I was out of my comfrot zone with this poem so was delighted to place:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/29/2015 4:55:00 PM

Hey, I think it pretty much sums up sex for some lucky people!! It's nice to think about it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 4:59:00 PM

Hey in poetry land we can write about anything Duke - so dreams can come true lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/28/2015 11:17:00 AM

Beautiful tantalizing sensual poem expressing extreme happiness and peace pictured with great beauty. 7 and best of luck from me. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 12:30:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Bl:-) hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

Date: 9/28/2015 3:06:00 AM

Can you ABC it, I think you can Jan, Way to go very sexy and sensual!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 5:35:00 AM

Thanks Kevin:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 9/27/2015 3:56:00 PM

So this is what you call tame. Oh Jan, what dictionary defined your word tame. I hope she found her Xanadu. Excellent!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 3:59:00 PM

lol - I really did struggle to write this James :-) I think Charlotte will have a tough job judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2015 11:07:00 AM

Jan, this is sizzling hot! I see the guys agree.Good luck in the contest.:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Alexis I thought I would stretch my capabilities with this one - not my style of writing so I was rather out of my comfort zone :-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2015 10:52:00 AM

Xanadu leads one to a state which is pleasurable, idyllic and exotic. Your poem manages to do that and more! gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 11:45:00 AM

I found it quite a challenge to write as am out of my comfort zone with sensual writes Paul. I hope Charlotte likes my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 9/27/2015 8:29:00 AM

Zowie, definitely high voltage, and definitely well done. I don't know if the contest has been judged, but I congratulate Jan on a premium-quality entry.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 9:10:00 AM

I'm a little out of my comfort zone writing sensual stuff Paul I just hope Charlotte likes it:-)Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/27/2015 12:35:00 AM

You gals just refuse to let me sleep tonight with all these sensual prose!!!! Loved this!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 12:36:00 AM

LOL Write one for the contest Arthur it may then help me sleep 0.635 and I am still wide awake - arghhhhhhhhh:-( hugs jan xxx

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2015 11:41:00 PM

Jan I'm sure it was difficult for you to be writing about sexual pleasure. Well we all understand. It's for a contest. I think you will do well with this write. I read the comments. My favorite is Demetrios comment. LOL. good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 12:33:00 AM

Demetrios's comment was brilliant - my favourite comment too:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/26/2015 11:31:00 PM

Sizzle.....sizzle......you go, girl......undulating was a w ord I toyed with. I love it. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2015 12:33:00 AM

LOL Eileen - sensuality is your forte not mine lol yours should fly! Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

OMG, I should read these erotic and tantalizing verses so late! I have to pray longer tonight, dear Jan! Ha-ha. Very tempting and a 7 for that. Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 6:50:00 PM

lol Demetrios - I am way out of my comfort zone writing in this way but I finally finished the poem so thought I better post it:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/26/2015 6:38:00 PM

As sensual as can be, Jan. I saw your replies to other soupers, and it is very humble of you to say so but though you are out of your comfort zone, it doesn't show on this write. Good luck! hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 6:47:00 PM

I don't feel comfortable writing sensual poems I can write romantic ones now at a drop of a hat with Darren when we collaborate but sensual I do not find easy:-( Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2015 6:15:00 PM

I know you are out of your comfort zone but a wonderful write a 7 and good luck in the contest!! xoxo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Eve I hope Charlotte likes it it took me an age to actually finish it:-) hugs jan xx

Miss Sassy

Date: 9/26/2015 5:01:00 PM

I love this!!!! And I know all the words! Very sensual.....Sassy

Miss Sassy
Date: 9/26/2015 5:16:00 PM

Of course she will...have confidence!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Miss Sassy I am a little out of my comfort zone writing in this style I hope Charlotte likes my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/26/2015 4:28:00 PM

A nice way to describe breasts.. I love the alabaster word.... Sizxliiing sweet Jan zzzsss : )

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Charma I am a little out of my comfort zone with this poem but thought I would give the contest a go:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/26/2015 3:49:00 PM

hot hot hot..you have a terrific abc write!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 3:51:00 PM

I struggled with it Cas I am well out of my comfort zone with this write:-) hugs jan xx