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Love's Odd Fate

LOVE’S ODD FATE He sees her cheeks, warm red, with his brushed palm. She hears his poetic love song, in tears. Dark skies fill eyes. She’s blind to them, strong balm. He fills her ears with cursive joy, long years. She feels the wind he blows. His soul - her psalm. He feels her shade his darkest thoughts and fears. It is the light he craves - he finds in her. So odd, she longs to hear, his voice concur. 5/7/2017 Ottava Rima Form abababcc rhyme scheme/iambic pentameter Word used: Odd Broken Wing’s Form O contest

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Date: 5/22/2017 8:41:00 AM
Kim congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Constance xx
Date: 5/21/2017 12:47:00 PM
Hi Kim: I'm not familiar with the poem form but I LOVED your poetic scheme!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2017 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 5/8/2017 8:18:00 AM
A beautiful read Kim...you have a unique way with words my friend...all the best and luck...WW
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, WW!
Date: 5/8/2017 7:07:00 AM
Beautiful Kim. Your poem really touched me. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris!
Date: 5/7/2017 10:14:00 PM
Very well done, Kim! I like your style! Best of luck to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, WW!

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