Love Is Eternal

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When the surface of love’s scratched...its fragility’s exposed yet, love’s eternal...until the end of time...and beyond. Flexible...love stretches well beyond yesterday's mistakes and tomorrow’s uncertainty...without ever breaking. (Free Verse Aug. 6, 2018 A four line poem on what is love Poetry Contest Faraz Ajmal 14 syllables per line (56) in total

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Well done!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/11/2018 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 8:45:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Emile - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your encouragement and comments my friend, Emile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/9/2018 6:50:00 PM

Very powerful and true sentiments about love, Emile. Well-said. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2018 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 8/8/2018 2:29:00 PM

How true this is, Emile! Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2018 2:58:00 PM

Thanks Curtis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 2:22:00 PM

Your poem seeks love deeper, well below the surface, the kind of love that is truly eternal. Beautifully expressed Emile! I adore the Rumi expression. I own about seven books by Rumi. No wonder we are kindred spirits! Congratulations on your second placement! I am honored to be in your company my friend. xxoo : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2018 2:57:00 PM

Wow! What can I say after that , but thank you so much Connie you truly are a friend, Emile.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/8/2018 12:38:00 PM

It is a really interesting take on the subject and I really enjoyed reading it, many congratulations on your wonderful 2nd position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2018 12:55:00 PM

Thanks Faraz, I appreciate the chance to compete with so many talented people, Emile.