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Gentle flowers giving praise to their life, lifting love as they climb to their height. With such grace from no vision of strife, granting heart when made glad by their sight. If one wish could only be said, be it, we lived for beauty and peace. Not one tear would our cause have to shed, If as flowers, our bouquets never cease. In truth, let our nature stay strong, and in hate not one petal be shed. May the scent of our bloom linger long, and blossom in purple and red. Last Line Prompt 2 Contest Sponsored By Julia Ward 05/20/2016

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Date: 6/1/2016 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful, gentle poem. I love it, Charlie. ...Fran
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Francis...
Date: 5/30/2016 11:27:00 AM
Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Funom...
Date: 5/29/2016 12:20:00 AM
Loved how you entwined nature, flowers and peace! :)
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Date: 5/29/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thanks for the read and comment Arthur, I appreciate the visit...
Date: 5/26/2016 9:10:00 AM
A splendid rose in the garden of poetry dear, Charlie. Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
Date: 5/25/2016 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful bouquet, Charlie, good luck in the contest ! 7
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 5/23/2016 4:00:00 PM
a very pretty poem you came up with as inspired by the last line. Good luck in the contest, Charlie.
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Date: 5/23/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Ms. Dietrich...
Date: 5/23/2016 12:11:00 PM
You painted this poem with a very gentle brush, with lovely uplifting thoughts to say. Beautifully expressed for the contest, Charlie.
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:20:00 PM
"Painted" is a wonderful compliment, thank you so much Tim...
Date: 5/22/2016 5:04:00 AM
Your poem is a delightful bloom, Charlie! Beautiful and serene...and I love the end stanza! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/22/2016 7:23:00 AM
My favorite also, thank you Paul for the encouragement...
Date: 5/20/2016 6:26:00 PM
Sweet and lilting are the lines, Charlie. Great write....Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you for such an uplifting note Eileen, you are too kind...
Date: 5/20/2016 2:38:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Charlie - Good luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:14:00 PM
Your sunflower always makes me smile Anne-Lise, thank you so much...

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