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Lover's Lament

The skies are blue, as is my heart The time is gone I want it to start The tears do fall and await your chest You know your heart is in my breast The days do tell of my love for thee Now you are gone do not forsake me Emotions mixed twixt longing and pain I can’t’ wait to be in your arms again. Sounds so crazy but I’m the same Longing for you is my middle name My heart is weak but love is strong How on earth could this be so wrong You are there and far away I am here Oh yes your loveliness I still fear There is much of you they desire Yet it is the flame you lit that is my fire. © Harry J Horsman and Mandy M Tams collab 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2016 12:03:00 PM
I am jealous of your collaboration. I wish someone wanted to collaborate with me. How did you do this. Line after line? How?
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Date: 12/17/2015 4:05:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 10/17/2015 12:08:00 PM
Ahh!! Great collaborative work..Way to go you two..Very passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/13/2015 7:14:00 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:29:00 AM
well done harry, this would make a great song, warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 8/21/2015 8:55:00 AM
Hiya like this one harry you must have had a good partner lol xx
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:58:00 PM
A genius poem on sadness of romantic passion expressed excellently by both of you. Expression stops but rhythm continues, crafted to the saturating zenith. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:27:00 AM
A superb love poem penned by my two fave poets and friends. I loved and enjoyed this much, the flow and everything is excellent. Thank you so much for sharing! More power and blessings! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:03:00 AM
Emotionally powerful and romantic to the core! Excellently written and developed dear Harry! Congratulations to both of you: Mandy and Harry, Harry and Mandy!
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Date: 7/28/2015 5:00:00 PM
This flows so well to be made by two. Call it a child that worked out. lol SuZ
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:27:00 AM
A lovely collab, Harry and Mandy, you were both on song for this one. Well done. By the way Harry, regarding your prediction on my poem 'Love in a far off place', can you possibly now give me the names of the winning horses in the Goodwood festival that starts today? Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:04:00 PM
I agree with Olive that middle line is so poignant - the imagery is so so powerful - I am sure many can relate to it - an outstanding collaboration Mandy and Harry :-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:11:00 AM
HArry the line longing for you is my middle name made me smile. :D! this one deliciously romantic and sweet though with some sad line!!lovely flow!!!~Olive ELoisa!
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