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Loveliness

Love, love of my life-oh how I adore thee Outside, just as pure and beautiful, like your heart and soul Very elaborately crafted, but oh so simple and sweet to love Even through the worse, you are my queen amongst mere women Life, life with you is something I never dreamt of-even in my sleep Incredibly, I can now see my dream, my dream has come true Never doubting your heart, never going to leave Evening will swallow day, the sun will set, and I will always be here Such is love, crazy, and unconditional Strong together, we shall conquer the world-hand in hand

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Date: 3/8/2016 2:55:00 PM
Very! moving, lovely lines 'Life, life with you is something I never dreamt of-even in my sleep', beautiful!. 'Evening will swallow day, the sun will set, and I will always be here'. Kim
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:20:00 AM
An awesome acrostic it is!!! Congrats Anthony, for your placement!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/23/2016 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:27:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Anthony.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:06:00 PM
Anthony, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:31:00 AM
Next time please enter as acrostic!
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Anthony on your 3rd place win. Such a beautiful write!
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