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Love Without Hope, a Parted Petal

Parted petal from flower’s bloom Drifts in breeze of last summer’s dream. Lost without hope in distant shore’s gloom. Love now drowns in depths of sea's stream.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:43:00 PM

Raj Napal, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

Raj Napal
Date: 4/8/2016 9:17:00 PM

Thanks for your praise.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/4/2016 4:18:00 AM

An amazingly crafted metaphorical verse!!! Congrats Raj, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Raj Napal
Date: 4/8/2016 9:16:00 PM

Thanks for your words.

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 4/3/2016 3:24:00 PM

Can picture the lost petal. Enjoyed.

Raj Napal
Date: 4/8/2016 9:16:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 1:35:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write Raj..

Raj Napal
Date: 4/2/2016 10:47:00 AM

Thanks a lot and congratulations on your entry too.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2016 3:46:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Raj Napal
Date: 4/2/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your appreciation of this little poem.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 7:54:00 AM

This is so brilliant Raj! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS

Raj Napal
Date: 4/2/2016 10:43:00 AM

I really appreciate your enjoyment of this little poem. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2016 9:22:00 AM

- Touching and beautifully written, Raj - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Raj Napal
Date: 3/29/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words.

Susan Palli

Date: 3/29/2016 8:44:00 AM

Oh so sad. Good one for the contest!

Raj Napal
Date: 3/29/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing this.