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Love Reborn

The blush of youth was gone As years had passed her by Her mirror didn't lie She wept and carried on A sad and bitter song For young love that had died. And then one winter morn A sailor came to town To search for Molly Brown For years he was forlorn He'd left her by the shore His love must now be found. When on the street they met Their love was heaven sent. Written on 8/19/2015 HexSonnetta Form

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/21/2015 2:12:00 AM
Wonderful write Laura n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/19/2015 7:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura; enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:57:00 PM
You used approximate rhymes sometimes, but other than that, very close to form! A sweet tale of love reunited. Congrats for your win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for placing me in your contest! It was totally new to me, and I knew I may not have gotten it right, so thanks again :)
Date: 9/19/2015 4:24:00 PM
Laura, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 9/19/2015 3:42:00 PM
Enjoyed your entry, Laura. A romantic poem that survives the test of time....Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 9/19/2015 11:27:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your kind words :)
Date: 8/20/2015 6:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. All the best for the contest. Enjoyed reading it.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/20/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 8/20/2015 5:18:00 AM
oh what a charming story you tell Laura - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/20/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks, Jan :)

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