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Why oh why did our sweet love die: My dearest heart Has another fancy come nigh: To take my part? Did good looks,fine words turn your head: On rebounds hook Then to another,he so quickly sped: And thee forsook Will words of love and this gold ring: Now make you mine With promises,to make bells ring: This troth is thine. | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/19/2021 8:18:00 PM
'with promises to make bells ring' how could she resist... I love this delightful poem Brian and the presentation is perfect - a FAV for me - thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/20/2021 1:37:00 AM
Bio Ann always has that little extra something
Date: 9/19/2021 12:24:00 PM
Hello Brian Strand, I also love this gold ring. I wonder if words of love and the gold ring will makes her yours.. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2021 11:12:00 AM
Hello Brain, oh I am happy to hear this news. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/20/2021 1:34:00 AM
They did over 6 decades ago Darlene
Date: 9/19/2021 7:51:00 AM
"Will words of love and this gold ring: Now make you mine" Oh my ! ( Hopefully so ) This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/20/2021 1:33:00 AM
Words carry so much weight Brandy,hence we poets thrive
Date: 9/19/2021 1:57:00 AM
Nice questions, Brian, love the long lines alternating with the short ones:)
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/20/2021 1:32:00 AM
Yes Jo format is so important in poetzing

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