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Love Lesson- Daddy-Son

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/20/2011 2:17:00 AM

Excellent little poem. I love the second line, with its double meaning (wheels on toys; wheels in the mind). Well done!

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 5/23/2011 9:30:00 PM

thank you sir. i try to place several meanings, as many as I can, into short poems. My Son (sun) is the Ray (ray) Ray is part of his name. I believe it add to the piece. Sort of an apology for the length. :) ~JSLambert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joseph in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:59:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. This reminds me a bit of Bobby Goldsboro's hit song of yesteryear "Watching Scotty Grow".

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:32:00 PM

Great to see you in the top ten Joseph with this honorable win in ninth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/12/2011 1:43:00 PM

Joseph congratulations on your win with this gem ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/12/2011 7:42:00 AM

Wonderful poem on your son,joseph!Congrats on your win--kashinath

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2011 11:55:00 PM

A Ray of hope joseph, lovely message here, Enjoyed. congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 10:28:00 PM

Very nice, joseph. Congratulations

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/11/2011 7:57:00 PM

Nice words for your son. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/11/2011 6:54:00 PM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Linda, joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2011 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2011 3:06:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your success in my magnet contest ..with these sweet and sensitive words luv.. thankxx for your support...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2011 6:58:00 AM

thannkxx Joseph for supporting my current contest .. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of each submission to the contest.. welcome aboard and if u need any help navigating the site just ring up the "Sweetheart" ..luv..

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/10/2011 12:46:00 AM

i guess you can't sleep niether? lol (or we're in different time frames >.>) very cute dodoitsu, the ray of sunshine, the ray of light that guides, the ray as of king. :D thanks for your comments sir n.n

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/10/2011 12:22:00 AM

I just bet he is! And I am sure he takes after you :D! and haha sorry to disappoint Joseph but Mayumi is not a booger, lol O_o -- if she was, that is one looker of a booger!! LOL - and haha eek! you remembered my comment to your comment in Debbie's poem? oh shucks I am embarrassed! blush, blush--I'll make sure to dial discreetly HAHa! Thanks for dropping by my poem-- it is finished now-- maybe you want to take another boog, umm I mean look? thanks :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 11:40:00 PM

Sweet as can be, joseph!