Love Is - Collaboration With Darren White

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Love is a trilogy Held always in our hearts Its fragrance captures one Right from the start Love is a Ballet Explosion of emotion That spins our senses In a dizzying pirouette Love casts silhouettes Soft and gently spun Highlighting all they touch In colourful hues

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/1/2017 12:58:00 PM

A wonderful duet. A wish only whispered to the sacred self at midnight. A triumphant cry from mountain tops. Love is ... as you have so beautifully described it.

Chris Green

Date: 7/3/2017 7:32:00 AM

The perfect little collaborative poem about love. You two did a fantastic job with this. Really nice my friends.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/2/2017 9:27:00 AM

You guys make a wonderful and winning team writing such gems. By the way, when I was a young child, my Native American (maternal) grandfather, told me I had two spirit guides, the wolf and the bear.

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 9:29:00 AM

Wonderful to hear, Robert! Always a pleasure to see you /|\

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/2/2017 9:18:00 AM

Breathtaking collaboration, spectacularly written.

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 9:23:00 AM

You are too kind /|\

Tim Smith

Date: 7/2/2017 9:02:00 AM

Love is this sweet interlaced gift of splendor

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 9:04:00 AM

Even your comments are poetic, Tim! Thanks /|\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2017 8:29:00 AM

A lovely collaboration!

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 8:39:00 AM

Once again, thank you very much, Kim /|\

Jan Allison

Date: 7/2/2017 8:13:00 AM

love is what I feel for the poem!!! the imagery is awesome and I love your interpretation of what love is ... i think Darren wrote the second stanza!:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 8:18:00 AM

100% correct, Jan! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment tonight /|\