Love Dreamer - the Lune Style

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~Love Dreamer~ (A Lune Suit) Hear your voice singing In the night And during the day Feel the touch of your Fingers here And there 'pon my skin I feel you near me When I sleep And when I'm awake And can feel the taste Of your kiss Upon my lips too As I hear your voice Singing me Each and every night Right under the moon Shinning so Bright above the stars. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 June.12.2015

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2015 7:56:00 AM

Dorian, this is a lovely, romantic write! I've read a little about this form (lune) but have never tried it. Think I will. Thanks for the inspiration. Love, Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/19/2015 1:23:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Kim,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it my dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.